Just saw this page while browsing itch.io and I'm definitely gonna play this demo! I've actually had an RPG Maker game set in Neverland in development for a while, though progress has been slow. This page actually gave me the inspiration to get back on it, and my desire to comment led to me finally making an itch account! About time.
I'm going to download this now and play it tomorrow, and I'll comment my thoughts when I'm done. This looks so cool, and I love the artstyle! I wonder how the story compares with my game...
Thank you so much for your kind words! You're lovely! Peter Pan and Alice are such fun concepts, right? I hope you enjoy the game once you're able to finally play it! Thank you so much for your support!
Okay, so I was only able to play it for about fifty minutes today, but here are my thoughts so far:
First of all, beautiful artstyle! I loved the stylistic choices, and especially Caroline's transformations. I'm doing Caroline's side first, and from what I saw of her at the school, she's not the kind of girl I'd like to meet in real life. I assume she'll get some character development later on that makes her better...or worse... I feel bad for the quiet boy. I have a theory that he might've been the one to push her, but I hope it was someone else, because as a former quiet kid, I like it better when quiet kids remain heroic rather than seeking vengeance on their bullies and becoming villains. The mentions of the war and the town's society are so interesting, and I'm looking forward to learning more of the lore to this setting. I highly doubt Caroline's papa is a good person... I'm also curious as to why Caroline is so insistent on finding the white rabbit.
There are some interesting parallels in the game. For example, I like how the story of Kitty and her “friends” mirrors (no pun intended) that of the evil queen from Snow White. I'm also getting lots of Deltarune vibes from the game, especially the introduction ("quiet people piss me off" indeed), and that's great! And the flower-health thing is a shout-out to games like Ib and Dreaming Mary, right? I'm also familiar with some of the free BGM you used, as I've been checking out free BGM sites and downloading music for my game.
As for critiques, I'm not really in the proper position to give advice, since I'm new to RPG Maker myself, but I will say that there are some grammatical mistakes here and there, and sometimes the text is cut off because it goes offscreen. Maybe preview the text boxes? Also, movement can be a bit confusing, as sometimes it's hard to know which tiles can be walked on and which can't, and it can be unclear whether to press A to progress or to just keep walking. I'm currently on the underwater part, and I'm looking for the white rabbit, but I'm a little stuck, so I think I'll give your walkthrough a try.
I'll comment more when I finish Caroline's route! :)
Thank you so much for your message! I'm glad you're enjoying so far and a lot of your theories are really cool!!
As for the text, you might need to install the font in the "Font" folder. The text needs to look just like the screenshots! Ive been fixing some errors in the new update that will come out soon! So stay tuned!
Again, thank you so much for everything this message was really nice to wake up to!
I played it until the clam collecting part in Caroline's route and I can say that the game is wonderful! I adore the character and map desings. But when I closed the game and opened it again, my save files were deleted so I will have to re-play it.
If you're able to contact me via direct message at @FellNeverland on Twitter or at Alicefelltoneverland.tumblr.com I'd be happy to send you a save file so you don't have to replay everything again!
Again, sorry for the inconvenience and thanks for the interest in the game <3
Thank you so much for your lovely comment!! I'm so glad you enjoyed Chess' character! There's so much more of him in the future! And in Lewis' side as well!!
Also as an added bonus I found it on Amino apps. Since all the RPG maker amino(s) died before I got into it, I found it on RPG Maker Horror amino while trying to invite members to my own art and RPG maker amino.
I usually dont really comment on games I play because I'm shy as hell, but I just couldn't NOT say anything about this one! God I'm so immersed on the story!!
Also, the design of the characters is so adorable, I really love Alice/Caroline's wonderland dress, it's so pretty! I'm super excited to see how Lewis wonderland clothes will be <3 (props for the pretty "choose your protag" screen!)
The story really has good pacing, I was super entertained playing! Something I wanna say is that I just feel SO bad for the clams ;0; Specially the rude clam from undersea (why?? i mean they were rude but as soon as trouble happened they told us to run away, like, they cared! I felt genuinely sad for 'em and all the other clams ;0; )
Omg, either way I'm looking forward to play the full game eventually, this has been a super cool demo, I'm hungry for more!! (this would be a good moment to put a reference of the Walrus and Carpenter but im not smart enough to come up with something lol)
btw..the mirror thing took me off guard, hope to see more stuff like that :DD
asdasdjas sorry for rambling i just loved this game jasdaks
This is the sweetest comment I've ever read. Thank you so much, you don't know how happy it made me to read you. I'm honoured you decided to comment on my game out of all the ones here <3
And I'm super happy you enjoyed the demo! You made me even more excited to continue and show you all the cool things the future will bring >:3
I hope the full game can end up meeting your expectations once more, I'll make sure to add more little spooky details hehe
Again, thank you so much for taking time to comment here, I will treasure it forever <3
Cute artstyle, an interesting cast, the many MANY references... I'm having the time of my life!
I also love the retro vibes this game has?? LIke, it feels like I'm reliving the primal 2010-ish horror rpg experience... Which is super cool, to be honest.
Also, the spooky atmosphere is very well integrated within the cute charming Disney-like plot. And... Chess is 🔥🔥🔥
This was a wonderful demo! I love the whole fairy tale theme that's going on, but I also love the scenarios that Alice is thrown into! It leaves a bit of mystery as to what exactly is going on.
I really loved the part with the sea food restaurant! I felt really bad for what was going on towards the end of it all :( I can't wait to see more of this when it releases! Thank you for taking the time to making and sharing this little demo! I hope that the rest of development goes smoothly!
One thing I will say is that I did have a bit of trouble choosing between Caroline and Lewis in the very beginning! The character select screen looked frozen for me when trying to switch between characters. Not sure if it's just something on my end though!
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment and for taking time to make a video about my game! With commentary even! You don't know how much this means to me! ♥️
The character selection scene is a known bug that I'm actively trying to fix for the next build! Thanks for commenting on it, it seems you're not the only one experiencing problems so I'll try and make it more accesible!
Again, thank you for your time and for giving Alice fell to Neverland a chance! ♥️
Alright! I don't think it's too much of an issue right now! I think it's more of a visual kind of bug than anything, since you can still here the sounds of you switching between characters! And thank you for taking the time for making such a wonderful game! I can't wait to see how it all unfolds!
I LOVE the game so far! The Walrus and Carpenter reference was great and the pacing is great.. There's yet so much to know about the plot and setting... Thank you so much for releasing this demo. I've been waiting for this for months! Can't wait for the full game to be released!
Thank you so much for your lovely comment, Tokkori you absolute angel! I'm so glad you enjoyed it and hope I can meet your expectations again once the full game is released ♥️🙏
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Just saw this page while browsing itch.io and I'm definitely gonna play this demo! I've actually had an RPG Maker game set in Neverland in development for a while, though progress has been slow. This page actually gave me the inspiration to get back on it, and my desire to comment led to me finally making an itch account! About time.
I'm going to download this now and play it tomorrow, and I'll comment my thoughts when I'm done. This looks so cool, and I love the artstyle! I wonder how the story compares with my game...
Thank you so much for your kind words! You're lovely! Peter Pan and Alice are such fun concepts, right? I hope you enjoy the game once you're able to finally play it! Thank you so much for your support!
Okay, so I was only able to play it for about fifty minutes today, but here are my thoughts so far:
First of all, beautiful artstyle! I loved the stylistic choices, and especially Caroline's transformations. I'm doing Caroline's side first, and from what I saw of her at the school, she's not the kind of girl I'd like to meet in real life. I assume she'll get some character development later on that makes her better...or worse... I feel bad for the quiet boy. I have a theory that he might've been the one to push her, but I hope it was someone else, because as a former quiet kid, I like it better when quiet kids remain heroic rather than seeking vengeance on their bullies and becoming villains. The mentions of the war and the town's society are so interesting, and I'm looking forward to learning more of the lore to this setting. I highly doubt Caroline's papa is a good person... I'm also curious as to why Caroline is so insistent on finding the white rabbit.
There are some interesting parallels in the game. For example, I like how the story of Kitty and her “friends” mirrors (no pun intended) that of the evil queen from Snow White. I'm also getting lots of Deltarune vibes from the game, especially the introduction ("quiet people piss me off" indeed), and that's great! And the flower-health thing is a shout-out to games like Ib and Dreaming Mary, right? I'm also familiar with some of the free BGM you used, as I've been checking out free BGM sites and downloading music for my game.
As for critiques, I'm not really in the proper position to give advice, since I'm new to RPG Maker myself, but I will say that there are some grammatical mistakes here and there, and sometimes the text is cut off because it goes offscreen. Maybe preview the text boxes? Also, movement can be a bit confusing, as sometimes it's hard to know which tiles can be walked on and which can't, and it can be unclear whether to press A to progress or to just keep walking. I'm currently on the underwater part, and I'm looking for the white rabbit, but I'm a little stuck, so I think I'll give your walkthrough a try.
I'll comment more when I finish Caroline's route! :)
Thank you so much for your message! I'm glad you're enjoying so far and a lot of your theories are really cool!!
As for the text, you might need to install the font in the "Font" folder. The text needs to look just like the screenshots! Ive been fixing some errors in the new update that will come out soon! So stay tuned!
Again, thank you so much for everything this message was really nice to wake up to!
Hey is this still ongoing as the tumblr no longer comes up?
The project is still going, but I'm afraid I had problems with Tumblr! I'm sorry for the trouble!
That's ok. I had it open in a background tab for a while and got curious.
Oh gosh this game is such a wonderful (heehee) delight! I'm already fully engaged and am very excited to see where this story goes!
Thank you so much!
I hope you can also enjoy when the full game is out! Thank you for giving my game a chance! <3
I played it until the clam collecting part in Caroline's route and I can say that the game is wonderful! I adore the character and map desings. But when I closed the game and opened it again, my save files were deleted so I will have to re-play it.
I'm so sorry to hear that!
If you're able to contact me via direct message at @FellNeverland on Twitter or at Alicefelltoneverland.tumblr.com I'd be happy to send you a save file so you don't have to replay everything again!
Again, sorry for the inconvenience and thanks for the interest in the game <3
This looks cool! :o Any chance of the demo getting a Mac version?
I'm so sorry but currently I'm unable to create a Mac version :( Maybe in the future with the full game out...
However thank you so much for the interest! ♥️
Is there any major differences between the characters in this demo? I know that the stories have "sides", but are the differences major?
Each side will have a unique story, with different maps and gameplay! The endings will be different as well!
Just finished the demo and I love chess <3
Well that aside, LOVEEE the story, desighn, characters! And the cabbage and king thing really freaks me out
Can't wait to play the Lewis side of the story <3
Thank you so much for your lovely comment!! I'm so glad you enjoyed Chess' character! There's so much more of him in the future! And in Lewis' side as well!!
Thanks for playing! ♥️
I think I'm doing something wrong for some reason it just won't show the game
I'm terribly sorry to hear that! What is the issue exactly? Does an error pop up, or is the game just absent alltogether?
I think the game just absent because instead of it being a folder it just a page
Oh! Maybe try right clicking the icon and exporting the game! If that doesnt work perhaps the dowload failed and you might have to redownload!
Thank you so much for playing and for taking the time to record a video, I'm super flattered!
By the way! You can keep playing if you interact with the items in the red room. There's still a bit of DEMO left! 👀
Thank you again, happy 2023!
I love all the references! (mostly the Heather and Deltarune ones)
Thank you so much for playing and taking time to comment! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and hope you can enjoy the full game in the future!
this was a fun game
Thank you so much for checking it out and streaming it! <3
Also as an added bonus I found it on Amino apps. Since all the RPG maker amino(s) died before I got into it, I found it on RPG Maker Horror amino while trying to invite members to my own art and RPG maker amino.
I usually dont really comment on games I play because I'm shy as hell, but I just couldn't NOT say anything about this one! God I'm so immersed on the story!!
Also, the design of the characters is so adorable, I really love Alice/Caroline's wonderland dress, it's so pretty! I'm super excited to see how Lewis wonderland clothes will be <3 (props for the pretty "choose your protag" screen!)
The story really has good pacing, I was super entertained playing! Something I wanna say is that I just feel SO bad for the clams ;0; Specially the rude clam from undersea (why?? i mean they were rude but as soon as trouble happened they told us to run away, like, they cared! I felt genuinely sad for 'em and all the other clams ;0; )
Omg, either way I'm looking forward to play the full game eventually, this has been a super cool demo, I'm hungry for more!!
(this would be a good moment to put a reference of the Walrus and Carpenter but im not smart enough to come up with something lol)btw..the mirror thing took me off guard, hope to see more stuff like that :DD
asdasdjas sorry for rambling i just loved this game jasdaks
This is the sweetest comment I've ever read. Thank you so much, you don't know how happy it made me to read you. I'm honoured you decided to comment on my game out of all the ones here <3
And I'm super happy you enjoyed the demo! You made me even more excited to continue and show you all the cool things the future will bring >:3
I hope the full game can end up meeting your expectations once more, I'll make sure to add more little spooky details hehe
Again, thank you so much for taking time to comment here, I will treasure it forever <3
This was such a great experience!!
Cute artstyle, an interesting cast, the many MANY references... I'm having the time of my life!
I also love the retro vibes this game has?? LIke, it feels like I'm reliving the primal 2010-ish horror rpg experience... Which is super cool, to be honest.
Also, the spooky atmosphere is very well integrated within the cute charming Disney-like plot. And... Chess is 🔥🔥🔥
Anyways, I'm dying to play the next demo update!!
It makes me so happy to hear you enjoyed it and had fun with all the references scattered around the game ~ ♥️
If you like Chess I'm happy to say there's more where he came from, hehe.
Thank you for the lovely comment, I'll work hard for future updates! 🐇🧚♀️✨
I really loved the part with the sea food restaurant! I felt really bad for what was going on towards the end of it all :( I can't wait to see more of this when it releases! Thank you for taking the time to making and sharing this little demo! I hope that the rest of development goes smoothly!
One thing I will say is that I did have a bit of trouble choosing between Caroline and Lewis in the very beginning! The character select screen looked frozen for me when trying to switch between characters. Not sure if it's just something on my end though!
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment and for taking time to make a video about my game! With commentary even! You don't know how much this means to me! ♥️
The character selection scene is a known bug that I'm actively trying to fix for the next build! Thanks for commenting on it, it seems you're not the only one experiencing problems so I'll try and make it more accesible!
Again, thank you for your time and for giving Alice fell to Neverland a chance! ♥️
Alright! I don't think it's too much of an issue right now! I think it's more of a visual kind of bug than anything, since you can still here the sounds of you switching between characters! And thank you for taking the time for making such a wonderful game! I can't wait to see how it all unfolds!
I LOVE the game so far! The Walrus and Carpenter reference was great and the pacing is great.. There's yet so much to know about the plot and setting... Thank you so much for releasing this demo. I've been waiting for this for months! Can't wait for the full game to be released!
Thank you so much for your lovely comment, Tokkori you absolute angel! I'm so glad you enjoyed it and hope I can meet your expectations again once the full game is released ♥️🙏